It needs more power
You could add a harder beat, the beat itself is pretty good, but instead of giving it like 1 snare and 1 kick. Try with different snares and kiks that plays at the same time. TO make the beat harder. The percs are good though :)
You could also add more synthes and a bassline that will make the song more powerful.
Unless you want this song to be a quiet song. But other than that, i liked it :)
If you want, then you can check out my song "Playing With Laser" it's my best DNB song yet. I just learned how to make good DNB music :D
All my other DNB songs really sucks.